When you open the blinds inside me
Your love opens me, gradually
And suddenly
Into a new dimension of understanding
And from this understanding we’ll emerge
From the rave,
With our senses heightened
Inside, a surge of power
And lightness will come!
In a sea of loving faces
Loud trumpets, angels
Psychedelic clouds
We’ll spread urgent our wing like arms
And fly.
Venetian Blinds
Once again Beautiful ….
Take Care….
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… and flying, touch the stars that shimmer on eternity’s palm… I loved the earlier version of this… mostly because, it is the thought in my mind this morning.
Stay in peace!
The earlier version was simply a ‘draft’ to express how rare and wonderful love is, in as much that two people find each other. It is a million to one, thus we carry on, carrying on, until we get it right…
And although my flow stopped short of any destination; your words, your insight gracefully provides one. Shimmering on eternity’s palm! I came to tears with that.
Thank you again Mary, have a beautiful day!!
Your comment reminds me of the poem Galaxies that you wrote sometime last year =)
https://67paintings.com/2012/03/25/galaxies/
Yes indeed well spotted, you have an unerring ability to recall my past utterances.
=)
Loved both this one and the other one